Happy Wewriwa everyone,
Another exciting opportunity to visit and read 8 sentences by creative authors. www.wewriwa.com allows everyone to tease and amuse with snippets from their WIP’s or a current release. Below are my 8 sentences from my paranormal work in progress. I think this will be my last visit with Dane and Callie. Next week I’ll switch up to something else I’m working on. In this scene, Dane challenges Callie to make the next move since one of them dropped the ball a year ago. Enjoy
Dane bit back his smile. He could have held her. She spun on her heels and walked backward toward the truck, her smirk a sassy reminder the whole way. Adorable. Of course, he’d never tell her that. “I’m sure you can get my number again. Call me, sweetheart. If you don’t, I’ll take it as a firm no and we’ll have our answer once and for all.”
Ooh, a challenge! I like it. Great use of the 8’s, Michelle. Well done.
Thanks JA
They seems to like to take there time. I wonder how long will pass before the call.
It happens Linda. LOL. I just won’t say who called who first. 🙂
Ha! Really nice excerpt! Most guys wouldn’t that comment slip by without acting on it, and I’m betting Dane won’t either. It’ll be awfully interesting to see what develops 🙂
Ah the games people play! Pick up the phone Dane!
Love it Gemma. Someone has to be the bigger person and give. I promise it happens 🙂
All this teasing…one of them is going to burst. 🙂
LOL, Danita. They do endure a bit of flirting and banter during the beginning.
I’m loving the playful nature of this snippet. Her actions and the dialogue together are really fabulous.
Thanks SJ, that’s what I want to hear 🙂
Game of chicken?
ROFL. It seems that way right?
they have come to a crossroads, very nice.
Thanks Jacy 🙂
Love the flirtation here, in words and actions. Very nicely written, Michelle! 🙂
Thanks Evelyn
A little snarky, but maybe she deserves it. I like the way he hands off the responsibility to her–I bet she’ll deny her feelings for a while, but give in and call him eventually.
Gotta love the dating dance. One of them gives in Caitlin 😉
Flirting all the way. Adorable, indeed. Super eight.
Thx Charmaine.
I love the dynamic between the two of them. Flirty, a little snarky and nicely tense.
Exactly what I was aiming for Aheila
Ball’s in her court! 😀
I’ll be sorry to see these two go, but I’m interested in what else you have going on. 🙂
Thanks Sarah, playing around with a contemporary right now
Nice, flirty exchange, Michelle!
LOL That’s a challenge one of them will lose or is it a win win? Great 8!
Love the flirt factor! Challenge accepted. Great 8! 😀
Tease, tease, tease… who’s going to give in? lol Great snippet!
Somehow I don’t think this is the end for these too. 🙂