Welcome back for another week of 8 sentences submitted by authors from their current work or works-in-progress. If you’re interested in checking others, visit www.wewriwa.com. This week I’m once again visiting my current work in progress with Shane and Olivia.
“Listen, lady. You wanna go somewhere, tell me now and I can drop you off before one of us gets hurt.”
Her sharp inhale rasped against his neck. She sat close enough for him to feel her every breath. Another fragrance joined the aroma of his lemon scented car freshener. Vanilla, his mind identified. He heard her scramble around and the pressure at his neck disappeared. A quick check in the rearview mirror showed an enticing curve of hip and a heart-shaped ass.
I got creative so as not to spoil the story too much and omitted some sentences. This doesn’t completely follow the sequence of the scene.
Lovely imagery, left me wondering if she’s looking for something or inviting him…
Thx Gemma. She’s doing both 😉
Loaded with sensory images. dynamite eight. Heart shaped ass? Too funny. A guy thing.
LOL, total guy visual
This seem like a very confrontational, burgeoning, relationship you’re crafting. Very nice work!
Thanks Emma 🙂
I wonder what is happening here and what she is looking for. Very intriguing.
This story is taking a lot from me, Linda. I’m glad its intriguing you
I liked the use of scent and now of course I’m really wondering what her story is and what she’s doing right *now* in that backseat…I definitely want to keep reading. Great #8!
Thanks Veronica
This is great. I love that he’s still so calm, and then can admire her bum even after she’d held a weapon on him : )
LOL, priorities I guess Millie.
I love the observations, they pull me right in. Great snippet.
Very nice, I’m loving your snippets, and look forward to them every week, can’t wait to see what happens!
He sure is calm. And what in the world is she doing with her ass in the air behind him? Talk about leaving us hanging! Great 8.
Love the description here–all senses were involved! Fast-paced and fantastic! Well done! 🙂
Very visual! Makes me want to read more–and that’s a good thing! Good job, Michelle! 🙂
…Men.
I wonder if she’s running, or they’re going to work this out so they both get where they want.
LOL! What’s she doing scrambling back there?! Inquiring minds… 😉
Ooo, nice! Lovely and sexy. Great 8! 😀
Great description. Wonderful details.