It’s Sunday again. My favorite day of the week. Welcome Weekend Writing Warriors. If you want to check out my other warriors go to www.wewriwa.com. I switched it up this week to start using sentences from my upcoming sci-fi release Honor Bound. Below, please enjoy my unedited 8 🙂
“The charge is murder.”
Vaan stood before the head of the Kaban Council, unable to believe the words he heard. The official red robes of a council member swayed about Councilor Radon’s ankles as he paced. The hasty proceedings taking place made a mockery of the penalty system Vaan instituted.
Looking to his side, the stoic expression on the faces of his finest warriors filled Vaan with pride. His men would give no one the pleasure of witnessing their emotions.
“How do you plead, Overlord Galip?”
Vaan Galip did not plead for any man.
I wonder who is dead.
Wow. I think I need to catch up. Who died and did Vaan really kill him/her?
LOL all will be revealed Anne
Powerful eight. He stands tall and proud despite the what lies ahead.
Thanks Charmaine. Glad it resonated
Goodness, that last line packs a punch. I think I like Vaan. Can’t wait to read more
Thx Shannyn. I like him too:)
That final sentence speaks so much about his character. Intense, well-written eight! 🙂
Thanks Evelyn. Gotta love an alpha warrior
Hints at a back story of some importance.
Tense little scene. I like him, seems very honorable…can’t wait to know more. Powerful excerpt!
I LOVE those last two lines:D
Thank you Eleri
Ok, I know this is a serious scene, but Councilor Radon cracked me up. Does he have something in common with that gas or is the name a coincidence?
ROFL, Kate. I didn’t think of that
I love the last sentence! I doubt it will hlp his case . . . But I love it anyway. 😀
Good for you, Vaan…stand your ground! Interesting eight, Michelle. Sounds like there’s a lot a stake here.
Awesome! What a great scene! I love scifi, by the way 😀 Love the change-up 😉
Fabulous opening! I totally want to know more. When is the book coming out?;)
Wow! Definitely got a great sense of character here. Strong and proud. Nice 8!