Michelle Howard – - Paranormal and Contemporary Romance Author
Paranormal and Contemporary Romance Author

Wewriwa-returns

   

 

Happy Wewriwa everyone,
Another exciting opportunity to visit and read 8 sentences by creative authors. www.wewriwa.com allows everyone to tease and amuse with snippets from their WIP’s or a current release. Below are my 8 sentences from my paranormal work in progress. I think this will be my last visit with Dane and Callie. Next week I’ll switch up to something else I’m working on. In this scene, Dane challenges Callie to make the next move since one of them dropped the ball a year ago. Enjoy

Dane bit back his smile. He could have held her. She spun on her heels and walked backward toward the truck, her smirk a sassy reminder the whole way. Adorable. Of course, he’d never tell her that. “I’m sure you can get my number again. Call me, sweetheart. If you don’t, I’ll take it as a firm no and we’ll have our answer once and for all.”

30 thoughts on “Wewriwa-returns”

  1. J.A.J.A.

    Ooh, a challenge! I like it. Great use of the 8’s, Michelle. Well done.

  2. Linda HamonouLinda Hamonou

    They seems to like to take there time. I wonder how long will pass before the call.

  3. MarciaMarcia

    Ha! Really nice excerpt! Most guys wouldn’t that comment slip by without acting on it, and I’m betting Dane won’t either. It’ll be awfully interesting to see what develops 🙂

  4. Gemma ParkesGemma Parkes

    Ah the games people play! Pick up the phone Dane!

    • michellehowardwritesmichellehowardwrites

      Love it Gemma. Someone has to be the bigger person and give. I promise it happens 🙂

  5. danitaminnisdanitaminnis

    All this teasing…one of them is going to burst. 🙂

  6. S.J. MayleeS.J. Maylee

    I’m loving the playful nature of this snippet. Her actions and the dialogue together are really fabulous.

  7. Jacy OliverJacy Oliver

    they have come to a crossroads, very nice.

  8. evelynjulesevelynjules

    Love the flirtation here, in words and actions. Very nicely written, Michelle! 🙂

  9. caitlinsterncaitlinstern

    A little snarky, but maybe she deserves it. I like the way he hands off the responsibility to her–I bet she’ll deny her feelings for a while, but give in and call him eventually.

  10. AheïlaAheïla

    I love the dynamic between the two of them. Flirty, a little snarky and nicely tense.

  11. Sarah WSarah W

    Ball’s in her court! 😀

    I’ll be sorry to see these two go, but I’m interested in what else you have going on. 🙂

  12. Kate MeaderKate Meader

    Nice, flirty exchange, Michelle!

  13. Heather BoydHeather Boyd

    LOL That’s a challenge one of them will lose or is it a win win? Great 8!

  14. karen Y. bynumkaren Y. bynum

    Love the flirt factor! Challenge accepted. Great 8! 😀

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