Michelle Howard – - Paranormal and Contemporary Romance Author
Paranormal and Contemporary Romance Author

#wewriwa #8sunday

   

 

It’s blog hop time. Visit www.wewriwa.com where authors get together and share 8 sentences from a current work or a published book. It’s awesome time to get sneak peeks and to offer words of encouragement. Without further ado, you will find my 8 based on a current WIP. Last week my heroine held a gun to the hero’s head and caught him off guard. Enjoy!

“You’ll have to tell me where I’m going.” A reasonable tone should calm some of her nerves. He hoped.

A loud sniffle met his words. “Give me a second.” The gun didn’t waver. Seconds ticked into minutes.

His patience didn’t have minutes.

36 thoughts on “#wewriwa #8sunday”

  1. Susan StuckeySusan Stuckey

    Definitely and interesting snippet – so short yet packed with so much tension. Nicely done.

  2. Anne LangeAnne Lange

    Very tense moment. I went back and reread last week’s. Both are well written, gives the right vibe for both characters. I love that he’s so calm, but not really. Well done!

  3. AheïlaAheïla

    So who’s manipulating whom? Interesting and very tense.

  4. jahornbucklejahornbuckle

    Great use of the 8’s and love this story. Love the last line. Well done, Michelle!

  5. evelynjulesevelynjules

    Succinct yet very powerful at the same time. Excellent excerpt, Michelle! 🙂

  6. Emma Jean hoffmannEmma Jean hoffmann

    His patience didn’t have minutes. This line not only hooks me, it sets my expectations high for this. You are talented.

  7. Sarah WSarah W

    She doesn’t know where she’s going, either? Uh-oh!

  8. burnsmillieburnsmillie

    Love the tension you’ve created with such brevity.

  9. S.J. MayleeS.J. Maylee

    You’ve hooked me, Michelle. Fabulous tension. Well done.

  10. veronicascottveronicascott

    Yes, he’s been more patient that I could ever be! Very interesting story, can’t wait to learn more about the person holding the gun. Great snippet!

  11. caitlinsterncaitlinstern

    Love how he’s got the gun to his head, but he’s the one trying to be patient. Of course, he seems confident he can get it away from her…

    • michellehowardwritesmichellehowardwrites

      Shane’s background will explain his reactions but that’s a reveal for later Caitlin ;0

  12. chellecorderochellecordero

    Wow, so tense. Excellent use of the 8s.

  13. maggiewells68maggiewells68

    I know I’m late, but I’m finally getting around. Wow! Great tension in this scene. I need more than 8, dammit!

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