Michelle Howard – - Paranormal and Contemporary Romance Author
Paranormal and Contemporary Romance Author

Weekend Writing Warriors

   

It’s Sunday and that means its time for www.wewriwa.com Below I’ve continued with 8 sentences for my latest project. I’ve fast forwarded some and now Olivia actually shares information with Shane

“Why don’t we start with your name?” Bulging muscles strained the arms of his white tee as he folded them over a massive chest.

Olivia swallowed past the lump in her throat. “Olivia.” No last name necessary.

His firm chin hitched in her direction. “The kid yours?”

She jolted.

15 thoughts on “Weekend Writing Warriors”

  1. chellecorderochellecordero

    Sounds very tense. Was it supposed to be “bulging muscles”? He does sound scary.

  2. burnsmillieburnsmillie

    Short and tense. Drew me in and stressed me out!

  3. ldsmith1818ldsmith1818

    ooh I love how you describe him. i’d be jolting too if being questioned by him! Love the subtle chemistry reaction. Can’t wait to read more!

  4. S.J. MayleeS.J. Maylee

    I can totally see that happening and it pulled me right in. Great snippet. 🙂

  5. veronicascottveronicascott

    Well he’s no nonsense all right. Very intense and intriguing snippet!

  6. Sarah WSarah W

    Goes straight for her vulnerable point, doesn’t he? I like him! 🙂

  7. Sarah CassSarah Cass

    Great tension…and a great set of arms is always so distracting.

  8. Teresa CypherTeresa Cypher

    Your dialogue is so natural. Wonderful snippet! 🙂

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