Thanks everyone for the help with word choice last week. Today I’m sharing another 8 from Arak’s story. For those following the hop, don’t forget to see what other authors are sharing 🙂 www.wewriwa.com. Last week we left Arak sneaking into a Marenian facility. Now for my snippet.
“Don’t move.”
The low order came from his right. Arak leaped to his feet, weapon aimed and only his core reflexes kept him from firing off a return shot at the two women across the room. He jerked the barrel of his laser toward the ceiling.
“I’m Jutak. I won’t harm you.” He knew he looked a sight in his all black combat gear with multiple weapons strapped to his body.
His nose twitched as the scent of their fear assaulted him.
Arak’s story will be out this spring, sometime in May.
Interesting. I like the scenario. I have been in a situation where I startled someone and he pulled a gun on me. Obviously, he didn’t shoot me. But the experience makes me wonder a bit. In your snippet, you say that only instinct kept him from firing on the women. Wouldn’t it be the reverse? Survival instinct would make him fire on someone — but a split second of rational thought would prevent it.
Love the snippet – intense. Glad he didn’t shoot!
Oh! Nice and tense. I would keep reading!:)
Scary situation. Don’t taser me, big guy. Please.
I can’t wait to read this one, loved the first book. Excellent excerpt !
Intriguing snippet. I look forward to reading more.
Intense scene going on. I would keep reading. Nicely done!