Michelle Howard – - Paranormal and Contemporary Romance Author
Paranormal and Contemporary Romance Author

Weekend Writing Warriors #8Sunday

   

 

I’m sorry I have my 8 up late. Cant believe I forgot to schedule. Below I’m sharing from my upcoming novella A Warlord’s Heart which is available for preorder and releases May 13th. Mikayla’s have a bit of trouble with one of the Su-Su’s she went to see. To visit other releases by fellow authors click here www.wewriwa.com. Enjoy

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Not so for Harol. The Su-Su had been rude from the moment of their arrival.

“I see the brute you joined has allowed you out. I questioned if you’d made him Su-Su in light of your birthing experience.”

Miki pushed aside her half-eaten bowl of fruit and fisted her hands in her lap beneath the table. Harol had never been a favorite neighbor and while she openly assisted any who asked for help in the running of their home, it was difficult to remain polite to the aging Raasa. His ideas tended to be outdated and his manner lofty.

“The Overlord is not a brute and my mate understands my reason for visiting my neighbors.”

 

19 thoughts on “Weekend Writing Warriors #8Sunday”

  1. Alexis DuranAlexis Duran

    Intriguing situation. I like all the the tension-filled clues you weave into this short snippet.

    April 26, 2015
    • michellehowardwritesmichellehowardwrites

      I tried and maybe if I wasn’t rushed getting this out I would have picked another 8?? But I like it and the scene involves a lot of secrets thanks to nasty Harol’s big mouth

      April 26, 2015
  2. veronicascottveronicascott

    Glad she stands up for herself, as much as possible in this situation. Tense! But made for an excellent excerpt…

    April 26, 2015
  3. danijacedanijace

    I’ve fisted my hands under the table too! To keep from punching someone. Great tension here!

    April 26, 2015
  4. Jenna JaxonJenna Jaxon

    Not completely sure what’s going on, but I know she’s showing some great restraint. Excellent “show” of tension.

    April 26, 2015
  5. Ed HoornaertEd Hoornaert

    Su-Su? Overlord? You present a lot of things for readers to want to learn about.

    April 26, 2015
  6. Cara BristolCara Bristol

    NIce! I enjoyed the first book.

    April 26, 2015
    • michellehowardwritesmichellehowardwrites

      Thanks Cara. It was nice visiting the characters these last few months

      April 26, 2015
  7. normandieanormandiea

    That’s a great snippet, but it makes me giggle because my kids call my mom their “Su Su.” This one is definitely not a granny. Lol.

    April 26, 2015
    • michellehowardwritesmichellehowardwrites

      LOL, just when you think you’ve made a word up. That’s the second time I’ve found that a word actually exist outside my head.

      April 26, 2015
  8. Teresa CypherTeresa Cypher

    Good job showing the underlying emotions via her body language. The tension is building. 🙂 Good 8.

    April 26, 2015
  9. Eleri StoneEleri Stone

    Definitely curious for more:)

    April 27, 2015
  10. GemGem

    Yes, I can see the urge to plant a facer on him. 😀

    April 27, 2015
  11. naomi shawnaomi shaw

    I love the tension. Great snippet

    April 28, 2015
  12. Tina ChristopherTina Christopher

    Sounds like Harol is poking his nose where it isn’t welcome;). Great snippet!

    April 29, 2015

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