Michelle Howard – - Paranormal and Contemporary Romance Author
Paranormal and Contemporary Romance Author

Wewriwa-Something New pt2



Welcome to another weekend with writing warriors 🙂 Today I’m continuing the story from last week. Something I’m playing with in my “free” time. Please see what other authors have going on here www.wewriwa.com.

We left off last week with Cellie receiving a mysterious vid-cube from a fellow guard.

Heart racing, Cellie shook the vid cube in her palms.

An image of the Commander appeared instantly. Wearing his full military uniform black jacket with black braiding and skin tight black pants, he stood with arms crossed behind his back, legs parted and his arrogant jaw tipped up.

“Senior Guard Manx.” His deep voice sent delicious tingles down her spine. “I look forward to seeing you this evening.”

Cellie waited with bated breath for him to say more. Steely gray eyes stared back for a second longer and then the cube blacked out.

Son of a…

LOL, hope you enjoyed the peek at this story that’s rambling along for me. I’m having fun with these two characters and both are proving to be quite stubborn and feisty.

15 thoughts on “Wewriwa-Something New pt2”

  1. Teresa CypherTeresa Cypher

    Agree with Charmaine! And you really left us hanging!! lol Good snippet, Michelle!

    July 26, 2015
  2. veronicascottveronicascott

    Interesting indeed and I loved the description! Can’ wait for more…terrific snippet!

    July 26, 2015
  3. Alexis DuranAlexis Duran

    Oooh, how irritating! No wonder she’s all tingly and frustrated. Fun snippet.

    July 26, 2015
  4. danijacedanijace

    The delicious tingles shocked me. This sounds like a love/hate attraction. 😉 Rather than using “black” several times, you could say “all black uniform” and then describe the braiding and pants. Vivid and emotionally charged snippet!

    July 26, 2015
    • michellehowardwritesmichellehowardwrites

      Thx Dani! I hate that sentence, it’s one fat run on but I figured I’d go through this with part horror and part amusement when I’m done.

      July 26, 2015
  5. Karen Michelle NuttKaren Michelle Nutt

    Oh my! What a hunk. 🙂 Great imagery. Loved the scene.

    July 26, 2015
  6. evelynjulesevelynjules

    Noooo! A black out at the Worst. Possible. Time. 😀 Lovin’ this story like crazy!

    July 26, 2015
  7. Ed HoornaertEd Hoornaert

    Beautifully vivid portrait of the commander.

    July 26, 2015
  8. chellecorderochellecordero

    Sounds very sure of himself. That vid cube sounds awesome.

    July 27, 2015
  9. EdenEden

    Sounds like he might be very glad he “awaits”…

    July 29, 2015

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